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What are some possiblle ways for morden workers to maintain work-life balance

What are some possiblle ways for morden workers to maintain work-life balance 6aKLK
Nowsaday, with the increase of society standard, along with our desire to be come succeed. We often have tendency to let our work take over and push aside our own well-being. And the more morden our life become, the more serious this problem get. In my opinion, I agree for a lot of people maintaining a work-life balance could be challenging, but it is essential. So, in this essay i will give you three suggestions to balance your work and your invidual life. First of all, always try to make time your beloved. You should know that netheir of your co-worker nor your company could love you as much as your family and friend do. In addition, remember you can change your work but you can not replace your loved one. That is why no matter how hetic your work get, do not let any busy schedule ruin your relationships between these people. So, when it come to set plan for your customer or college added some time for your family and friend too. Sometime a simple dinner or a small conversation can really make different. Secondly, you should set bondaries for your work and personal life. This means when you leaves your office try to avoid thinking about any unfinished task or up coming project and vice versa. If that sound impossible for you set a separate devices or things for both work and normal life. For instance, consider to have divive email or other platform’s account. So, you can forcus more in your priority in different time in a day. Obviously, we are all human ourselves; so it is impossible for we to manage too many things at the same time or else debelitating is just a matter of time. Finally, accept that there is no perfect work life balance plan. Life is full of unexpected things and you are not a professional prophet. You can not expect to have enough stregth to work extremely effective and go home early to your family. The true key is not to stick yoursefl in a perfect plan but a realistic one. Some days you work might be your priority and some time your own life might. As long as you do not burn out from work your finger to the bone then it is completely fine. Balance is achieve overtime not each day. In conclusion, in today competitives world people often forget to set balance to their work and life. I believe by the three advices I have suggest above morden worker will be able to achieve a true work life balance life.
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succeed. We
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take over and push aside our
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well-being. And the more
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maintaining a work-life
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could be challenging,
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it is essential.
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will give you three suggestions to
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and your
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life.

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bondaries
for your
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and personal
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life
. This means when you
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leaves
your office try to avoid thinking about any unfinished task or up coming project and vice versa. If that sound impossible for you set a separate
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devices
or things for both
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work
and normal
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email or other platform’s account.
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more in your priority in
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in a day.
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it is impossible for we to manage too
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a matter of time.

Finally
, accept that there is no perfect
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life
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plan.
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is full of unexpected things and you are not a professional prophet. You can not
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extremely
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in a perfect plan
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a realistic one.
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might be your priority and
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long as you do not burn out from
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your finger to the bone then it is completely fine.
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overtime not each day.

In conclusion
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competitives
world
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to their
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. I believe by the three advices I have
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worker will be able to achieve a true
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IELTS essay What are some possiblle ways for morden workers to maintain work-life balance

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5 paragraphs
433 words
6.0
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