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What are some popular places to visit on your country?

What are some popular places to visit on your country? MMmOQ
What are some popular places to visit in your country? Why are they popular? Why do people travel? There are a lot of popular places in my country. We have a lot of natural places that are interesting to see and have a rest if you just arrived to Tashkent for the first time, you should go straight to Chorsu Bazar, one of the most important markets in Central Asia and fascinating place to get a vague feeling of what the ancient Silk Road trade used to be. It is popular place for tourists to visit, mostly because it is a great place to observe the enhnic and cultural blend Tashkent is famous for. This bazar includes all of various things, from national products to local golds. Mostly tourists purchase souvenirs and enjoy historical events only in our big bazar Chorsu.
What are
some
popular
places
to visit in your country? Why are they
popular
? Why do
people
travel? There are
a lot of
popular
places
in my country. We have
a lot of
natural
places
that are interesting to
see
and have a rest if you
just
arrived to Tashkent for the
first
time, you should go straight to
Chorsu
Bazar
, one of the most
important
markets in Central Asia and fascinating
place
to
get
a vague feeling of what the ancient Silk Road trade
used
to be. It is
popular
place
for tourists to visit,
mostly
because
it is a great
place
to observe the
enhnic
and cultural blend Tashkent is
famous
for. This
bazar
includes all of various things, from national products to local golds.
Mostly
tourists
purchase
souvenirs and enjoy historical
events
only
in our
big
bazar
Chorsu
.
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IELTS essay What are some popular places to visit on your country?

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