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What are some popular places to visit on your country?

What are some popular places to visit on your country? MMmOQ
What are some popular places to visit in your country? Why are they popular? Why do people travel? There are a lot of popular places in my country. We have a lot of natural places that are interesting to see and have a rest if you just arrived to Tashkent for the first time, you should go straight to Chorsu Bazar, one of the most important markets in Central Asia and fascinating place to get a vague feeling of what the ancient Silk Road trade used to be. It is popular place for tourists to visit, mostly because it is a great place to observe the enhnic and cultural blend Tashkent is famous for. This bazar includes all of various things, from national products to local golds. Mostly tourists purchase souvenirs and enjoy historical events only in our big bazar Chorsu.
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IELTS essay What are some popular places to visit on your country?

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1 paragraphs
141 words
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