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1. Agree – Disagree : Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be death of grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree?

1. Agree – Disagree: Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be death of grammar and spelling. ljeYX
Man is a social animal and we cannot survive without exchanging our thoughts, emotions and information with another. There are plenty of ways through which we could do transmission of communication. A section of the society deem that tiny and compact massages are much easier and famous in contemporary era but another section of the society believes that it would be ruined basic and core needs of the language like spelling and grammar. I tends to disagree over here, I will not support why I am belief that but at the same time I will present contradictory view that other might have in the society. The primary reason for my support here is comfortless and convexity of the information that we would like to pass on. Now a day with these types of massages are too easy and reach to the people in no time. So I do believe that real time access of the messages is significant rather than core needs of the language. Many institutions run different types of courses for awareness of the functionalities of the short form of communication. For example, Majority of the masses will do understand meaning of WC is equal to welcome and TC means Take care. Another prominent impact behind my outlook is Time saving in writing or reading of these massages. Instant and new ways of communication save plethora of time in day to day life and man could concentrate on another work. In today’s era we have scarcity of time so this type of scientific approach will gain more accessibilities and popularity among class of the people irrespective of age. Fortunately, we could use this ton of communication in informal and professional level too. On the another hand, there are individual in the society who are in onion that compact massage will cause death of the basic needs of the language. Foremost reason behind this is negative impact in the minds of the people and will have adverse effect in their academics and formal sector of work. Because of extensive usage of this form will deteriorate the knowledge of the people. Another point in their believe is understating. If in the massage, either party of does not have any idea about the complexity and characteristics of the massage than it would be very worst effect and might goes matter in dark circle. To recapitulate, there surely are those in the society, who seems to be convinced with the fact that because of tremendous use of short and compact form led to death of popularity of language and they have all right and send of estimation behind their belief. I, however, am of the opinion that if we adopt this scientific approach with utmost accuracy then definitely would have positive impact because of time saving and rapid speed with relaxing and comfortless to each other.
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Man
is a social
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animal and
we cannot survive without exchanging our thoughts, emotions and information with another. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of ways through which we could do transmission of
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communication
. A section of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
deem that tiny and compact massages are much easier and
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famous
in contemporary era
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but
another section of the
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society
believes that it would
be ruined
basic and core needs of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
like spelling and grammar. I
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tends
to disagree over here, I will not support why I am belief that
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but
at the same
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time
I will present contradictory view that other might have in the society.

The primary reason for my support here is comfortless and convexity of the information that we would like to pass on.
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Now
a day with these types of massages are too easy and reach to the
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people
in no
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time
.
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So
I do believe that real
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time
access of the messages is significant
rather
than core needs of the
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language
.
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Many
institutions run
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different
types of courses for awareness of the functionalities of the short form of
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communication
.
For example
,
It seems that an article is missing.
Majority of
the masses will do understand meaning of WC is equal to welcome and TC means Take care.

Another prominent impact behind my outlook is
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Time
saving in writing or reading of these massages. Instant and new ways of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
save plethora of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
in day to day life and
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man
could concentrate on another work. In
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today
’s era we have scarcity of
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time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
this type of scientific approach will gain more
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accessibilities
and popularity among
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class
of the
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people
irrespective of age.
Fortunately
, we could
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use
this ton of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
in informal and professional level too.

On the another hand, there are individual in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
who are in onion that compact massage will cause death of the basic needs of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. Foremost reason behind this is
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negative
impact in the minds of the
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people
and will have adverse effect in their academics and formal sector of work.
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Because
of extensive usage of this form will deteriorate the knowledge of the
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people
. Another point in their
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believe
is understating. If in the massage, either party of does not have any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
about the complexity and characteristics of the massage than it would be
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very
worst effect and might goes matter in dark circle.

To recapitulate, there
surely
are those in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
, who seems to
be convinced
with the fact that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of tremendous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of short and compact form led to death of popularity of
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
language and
they have all right and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
of estimation behind their belief. I,
however
, am of the opinion that if we adopt this scientific approach with utmost accuracy then definitely would have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
impact
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
saving and rapid speed with relaxing and comfortless to each other.
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IELTS essay 1. Agree – Disagree: Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be death of grammar and spelling.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
474 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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