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What are some important qualities of a good friend?

What are some important qualities of a good friend? 6K7AW
Well, first and foremost, i would say friends are the major public group which we can associate after our family members. Furthermore, They should have some valuable qualities for being a stunning friend. There are plethora of reasons based for friend becomes a good friend. What’s more, the most significant feature is he should give his best for his friend's success and bright future. And also when he become helpless the best mate should give support without any hesitation. tO WRAP UP, a GOOD FRIEND always should full fill with love and honest. Because a loving mate can be a shadow of a every person's life
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friends
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valuable qualities for being a stunning
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friend
. There are plethora of reasons based for
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friend
becomes a
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good
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friend
. What’s more, the most significant feature is he should give his best for his friend's success and bright future. And
also
when he become helpless the best mate should give support without any hesitation.
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tO
WRAP UP, a
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GOOD
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always should full fill with
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love
and honest.
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a loving mate can be a shadow of
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every person's
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life
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IELTS essay What are some important qualities of a good friend?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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