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Describe A Place Where You Like To Go Shopping

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The mall is one of my favorite places to browse for clothes. I enjoy shopping here because of the mall's size, diversity of things, and, most importantly, the large number of retailers. This retail mall is not far from my home; it takes me less than ten minutes to go there each time. When I come here, I generally head to the clothes shop since there are so many various clothing companies in this mall. And I'll have a lot of alternatives for purchasing something I want. If I go shopping with my family, I generally head to home goods and furniture stores. In addition, there is a bookshop in this building, so I generally go there to buy a few books whenever I visit. Despite the fact that I don't come here very frequently, I always buy a lot because of the diversity of goods and the fact that it contains stuff that I can't get at the mall. There are several restaurants and amusement parks in this business district, in addition to apparel and furnishing retailers. That is why I enjoy going here whenever I get the opportunity.
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is one of my favorite places to browse for clothes. I enjoy shopping here
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because
of the mall's size, diversity of things, and, most
importantly
, the large number of retailers. This retail
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mall
is not far from my home; it takes me less than ten minutes to go there each time. When I
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come
here, I
generally
head to the clothes shop since there are
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so
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many
various clothing
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companies
in this
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mall
. And I'll have
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a lot of
alternatives for purchasing something I want. If I go shopping with my family, I
generally
head to home
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goods
and furniture stores.
In addition
, there is a bookshop in this building,
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so
I
generally
go there to
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buy
a few books whenever I visit. Despite the fact that I don't
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come
here
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very
frequently
, I always
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buy
a lot
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because
of the diversity of
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goods
and the fact that it contains stuff that I can't
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get
at the
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mall
. There are several restaurants and amusement parks in this business district,
in addition
to apparel and furnishing retailers.
That is
why I enjoy going here whenever I
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get
the opportunity.
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IELTS essay Describe A Place Where You Like To Go Shopping

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
190 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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