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What are disadvantages and advantages sides of using public transportation?

What are disadvantages and advantages sides of using public transportation? m9Y3n
In today's word, as the number of people increases, so does public transport. i will try to explore my positon with some plansible illustrations in the following paragraphs. People employ public transport all at the country. Some of peoples is said that public tarns is cheaply and a lot of number therefor peoples embrace public transport. The most public tarnsport introduce students because hardly have same of students a lot of money. If you exit at public tarnsport, you will go to your work and study on the time. One of the useful sides it is hardly andenger. Public transports are sailed by skilled driver. The boys whose fathers a lot of money is not embrace public transport because they have private the cars. i prefer going thought the bus to going thought private the cars to the course because private cars is expensive. That i go to course throught public transport helped me to don't spend many time. Some of peoples are used to go to career thought public transport. During rush hour the buses are aleays jam-packed actually the passengers are packed like sardines. Sametimes there are serious pile-ups onthe main roads. If your house is be away the buses stop. You have to go the bus stop. Same people exit to the bus this bring intervention with other people. The bus stope only bus stop your workshop may be long bus stop last you late your work. To conclude, according to the above mentroned reasons. i believe that the public transport have more disadvantage and advantage.
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plansible
illustrations in the following paragraphs.
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employ
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all at the country.
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of
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peoples
is said
that
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public
tarns is
cheaply
and
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a lot of
number therefor
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peoples
embrace
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. The most
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tarnsport
introduce students
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because
hardly have same of students
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a lot of
money. If you exit at
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public
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tarnsport
, you will go to your work and study on the time. One of the useful sides it is hardly
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andenger
.
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Public
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are sailed
by skilled driver. The boys whose fathers
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a lot of
money is not embrace
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because
they have private the cars.
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prefer going
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the bus to going
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private the cars to the course
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private cars is expensive. That
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i
go to course
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throught
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me to don't spend
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of
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are
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used
to go to career
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. During rush hour the buses are
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aleays
jam-packed actually the passengers
are packed
like sardines.
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Sametimes
there are serious pile-ups
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onthe
main roads.
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away the buses
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. You
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. Same
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exit to the bus
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intervention with other
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. The bus
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stope
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bus
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your workshop may be long
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bus
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last you late your work.
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, according to the above
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mentroned
reasons.
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i
believe that the
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public
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transport
have more disadvantage and advantage.
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IELTS essay What are disadvantages and advantages sides of using public transportation?

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