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What are crime and punishment? What types of crimes? Describe your minds about crime and punishment.

What are crime and punishment? What types of crimes? Describe your minds about crime and punishment. RWwNo
Crime is a bad thing that can be done by everyone. In ancient times crimes were in society. And people could try to punish who committed it. Punishments are setted depending on crimes. Every state orders in its own law. The laws regulate society. If someone has a crime, laws give a punishment him/her. Types of crimes are different. It may be big or small, serious or petty and etc. It depends on the causing damage to the society or state. In criminal law or codes of the most states human killing or murdering is noticed the worst crime ever. The punishment will be severe. Most states determine capital punishment for killing or murdering. Petty crimes include shoplifting, vandalism, theft and etc. In short every crime should not be unpunished.
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regulate society. If someone has a
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crime
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him/her. Types of
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. It depends on the causing damage to the society or
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law
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states
human killing or murdering
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crime
ever. The
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punishment
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states
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punishment
for killing or murdering. Petty
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crimes
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IELTS essay What are crime and punishment? What types of crimes? Describe your minds about crime and punishment.

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