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Weekend routine and whole day

Weekend routine and whole day meyK

On Saturday, I woke up at 11: 00 clock. It was weekend so I thought it would better if I turned off the alarms, in this way, I would get better sleep. After that, I prepared some sandwiches. sandwiches was quite tasty. then we went to shop for bought some groceries. we spent 30 minutes in shop and spiked all the organic food. After that, we went to home and cooked Mexican rice. House was so messy and things were scattered here and there. Moreover, I found old tea bag from the box it was red label orange pekoe. however, it looked brand new box but when I checked the expiry date it was gone. I had spent some time in watching television. Where I saw giant ship stuck in swiss canal and it caused $400 Billion loss every day to economy sector. After this, I realised curtain was quite filthy and unorganised. it was washed by bleech and powder. After all this work we went to shop to order cheeseburgers and coke. we were so tired and had less energy to continued it again. So we went for night walk and then we were getting ready for bed.

On Saturday, I woke up at 11: 00 clock. It was weekend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 it would Did you mean "be better"?be better
better
 if I turned off the alarms, in this way, I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 better sleep. After that, I prepared This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 sandwiches. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSandwiches
sandwiches
 was quite tasty. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
 we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 to shop for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 groceries. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 spent 30 minutes in shop and spiked all the organic food. After that, we There isn't usually a preposition before "home". Did you mean "went home"?went home
went to home
 and cooked Mexican rice. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
House
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 messy and things were scattered
 here and there. Moreover
, I found This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 tea bag from the box it was red
 label orange pekoe. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHowever
however
, it looked 'brand new' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "brand-new".brand-new
brand new
 box This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 the expiry date it was gone
. I had spent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time in watching television. Where I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 giant ship stuck in Possible spelling mistake found.Swissswimsswishswigs
swiss
 canal and it caused $400 Billion loss every day to economy sector. After this, I Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.realized
realised
 curtain was quite filthy and Possible spelling mistake found.unorganized
unorganised
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
was washed
 by Possible spelling mistake found.beechbreechbleachleechblenchbletch
bleech
 and powder. After all
 this work we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 to shop to order cheeseburgers and coke. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 tired and had less energy to continued it again. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 for night Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).walk, and
walk and
 then we were getting ready for bed. 