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website simply doesn't work DwlL6
We have already tried to get access several times with others. The website simply doesn't work at all. If a candidate won't provide his portfolio shared on behance. net, dribbble. com, or at least in a. pdf document, we would be forced to reject him. I want to mention if you ever see that reviewing of candidate's portfolio requires access to unknown resources using passwords, VPNs, and other suspicious methods - they would be rejected automatically because it contradicts our cybersecurity standards.
We have already tried to
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get
access several times with others. The website
simply
doesn't work at all.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
a candidate
Consider removing 'will'. (Usually, 'will' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless in the sense 'want to' or 'be willing to'.)
won't provide
his portfolio shared on
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behance
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
net
,
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dribbble
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
, or at least in a.
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pdf
document, we would
be forced
to reject him.

I want to mention if you ever
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that reviewing of candidate's portfolio requires access to unknown resources using passwords,
Possible spelling mistake found.
VPNs
, and other suspicious methods
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
they would
be rejected
automatically
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it contradicts our cybersecurity standards.
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IELTS essay website simply doesn't work

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
82 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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