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We went to the desert and it was nice day

We went to the desert and it was nice day LLAQp

Last month I went with my friends to the desert. We woke up at 7: 00 am because we needed to stay for a long time there. We put our camp and started to make breakfast; it was really delicious. When we finished our breakfast, we played card games such as UNO, Saudi Deal, and Monopoly for 2, or 3 hours. When we were playing, my friend Hussein was surprised when he saw a snake on our carpet, but fortunately, it's on the second carpet. We were very scared in the beginning but I went quickly and took a stick from the car and started to move it out. After the long story, we started to prepare for our lunch and started cooking our Mandi. Then we took a break, or spoke. In the afternoon

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went with
 my friends to the desert. We woke up at 7: 00 am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we needed to stay for a long time there. We put our camp and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinitiated
started
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 breakfast; it was really
 delicious.

When we finished our breakfast, we played card games such as UNO, Saudi Deal, and Monopoly for 2, or 3 hours. When we were playing, my friend Hussein was surprised
 when he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a snake on our carpet, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
fortunately
, it's on the second carpet. We were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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but
 I went quickly
 and took a stick from the car and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinitiated
started
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 it out. After the long story, we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinitiated
started
 to prepare for our lunch and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinitiated
started
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. Then we took a break, or spoke. In the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphafternoon.afternoon!afternoon?afternoon:afternoon,afternoon;
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