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We must be the change we wish to see in the world! --M.K. Gandhi Write an essay of at least 250 words about the following questions: What does this statement that Mahatma Gandhi often repeated mean? How have you adopted this statement in your life or how would like to? Or do you think this statement is unimportant?

We must be the change we wish to see in the world! --M. K. Gandhi Write an essay of at least 250 words about the following questions: What does this statement that Mahatma Gandhi often repeated mean? How have you adopted this statement in your life or how would like to? Or do you think this statement is unimportant? GMLGB
If you want innovation in the world, you must start the revolution by yourself. But what is the real meaning of the statement? In this essay, I will write about my opinion on this statement. We cannot advance the earth if we just look at it and talk about what’s wrong with it. If we revision our mind, our soul and action will change too. And it will lead our environment to change to adjust to us too. There is one Mongolian aphorism said, “Fix yourself first and thus fix your home. After fixing your home fix your state. ”. If you want to reverse the nature, you must start with yourself. And then you can encourage the people around you to advance, then they would spread those changes to their relatives too. In this way the earth could innovate. In my case, I have never thought about this, but recently I was willing to do the charity more. It all started because I need to study oversea university (Charity helps to get a scholarship). But after I started doing charity, it became a part of my life, not just for a scholarship. It also affected my family members and they started to get interested in donations. Then my brother and his friends helped me to my charity works too. Just looking at this, my small willingness can expend into a lot and develop a much people. In conclusion, if everyone changes themselves by being responsible, it can make a huge revolution. Additionally, doing something in action is way better than simply talking.
If you want innovation in the world, you
must
start
the revolution by yourself.
But
what is the real meaning of the statement? In this essay, I will write about my opinion on this statement.

We cannot advance the earth if we
just
look at it and talk about what’s
wrong
with it. If
we revision
our mind, our soul and action will
change
too. And it will lead our environment to
change
to adjust to us too. There is one Mongolian aphorism said, “
Fix
yourself
first
and
thus
fix
your home.
After
fixing your home
fix
your state. ”. If you want to reverse the nature, you
must
start
with yourself. And then you can encourage the
people
around you to advance, then they would spread those
changes
to their relatives too. In this way the earth could innovate.

In my case, I have never
thought
about this,
but
recently I was willing to do the
charity
more. It all
started
because
I need to study oversea university
(Charity
helps
to
get
a scholarship).
But
after I
started
doing
charity
, it became a part of my life, not
just
for a scholarship. It
also
affected
my family
members and
they
started
to
get
interested in donations. Then my brother and his friends
helped
me to my
charity
works too.
Just
looking at this, my
small
willingness can expend into a lot and develop
a much
people
.

In conclusion
, if everyone
changes
themselves by being responsible, it can
make
a huge revolution.
Additionally
, doing something in action is way better than
simply
talking.
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IELTS essay We must be the change we wish to see in the world! --M. K. Gandhi Write an essay of at least 250 words about the following questions: What does this statement that Mahatma Gandhi often repeated mean? How have you adopted this statement in your life or how would like to? Or do you think this statement is unimportant?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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