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Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion NrwN0
Although it is sometimes thought that deforestation and declining biodiversity caused by human beings is（are） getting worse, others think we can still take actions to alleviate the problem. In my opinion, I consider that individuals and the government can work together to help rebuild the ecosystem. On the one hand, some people believe there are many effective solutions to reduce human activities’ adverse effect on the trees and animals, and I agree. Firstly, the government can curb the cutting down of trees and poaching by introducing better laws. In other words, those who fail to confront the rules should pay huge fines or even be put into jail. Secondly, the government can subsidize for natural reserves and founding professional groups to rescue endangered species. The state should also ensure reforestation of areas that have been affected. Moreover, schools ought to teach children the negative effects of human activities on the environment, and people can learn to preserve resources earlier. On the other hand, it is often believed that people’s our influence on the environment is tremendous, and the destruction is hard to make up. Due to industry, human population, and agriculture, more land is needed. Many forests are permanently changed into agricultural land or housing areas, which results in the decreasing of natural habitats, and animals will have nowhere to live. Once a species is lost, it cannot be brought back. Furthermore, plants and animals depend on each other, so it also takes years for some plants to flourish again. Without a balanced ecosystem, the global warming will increase and some indigenous people will lose their homeland. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that it’s never too late to take steps to make up for any types of environmental damage.
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sometimes
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thought
that deforestation and declining biodiversity caused by
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is（are）
getting worse, others
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think
we can
still
take actions to alleviate the problem. In my opinion, I consider that individuals and the
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government
can work together to
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help
rebuild the ecosystem.

On the one hand,
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some
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people
believe there are
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many
effective solutions to
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reduce
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human
activities’ adverse effect on the trees and animals, and I
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agree
.
Firstly
, the
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government
can curb the cutting down of trees and poaching by introducing better laws. In
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other
words, those who fail to confront the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
should pay huge fines or even
be put
into jail.
Secondly
, the
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government
can subsidize for natural reserves and founding professional groups to rescue endangered species. The state should
also
ensure reforestation of areas that have been
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affected
.
Moreover
, schools ought to teach children the
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negative
effects of
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human
activities on the environment, and
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people
can learn to preserve resources earlier.

On the
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other
hand, it is
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often
believed that
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people’s
our influence on the environment is tremendous, and the destruction is
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hard
to
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make
up. Due to industry,
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human
population, and agriculture, more land
is needed
.
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Many
forests are
permanently
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changed
into agricultural land or housing areas, which results in the decreasing of natural habitats, and animals will have nowhere to
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live
. Once a species
is lost
, it cannot
be brought
back.
Furthermore
, plants and animals depend on each
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other
,
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so
it
also
takes years for
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some
plants to flourish again. Without a balanced ecosystem, the global warming will increase and
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some
indigenous
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people
will lose their homeland.

In conclusion
, while
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people
may vary in their opinion, I
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think
that it’s never too late to take steps to
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make
up for any types of environmental damage.
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IELTS essay Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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6.5
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