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We have many famuse medication in this world as Covid-19 vaccien, and many patients get it , so today I will talk about how to get the patient the medication in steps

We have many famuse medication in this world as Covid-19 vaccien, and many patients get it, so today I will talk about how to get the patient the medication in steps Nl12N
First, the pharmists manufacturer the medication. They count amounts of substances that need it. Then they start of manufacturing of medications. Second, they pack the medications in boxes. Before they pack the medications, they count to how much medication should be in one box. The third- step, when they get on purchaser, they sall it. Until they get purchaser, they post adavntege in media. Then they will get purchaser. The next step they will transport medications to far patients. That happen because posting in media, so many patients in different places saw that and buy it. Finally, patient use it. Whille the patient has medication, he or she will use it. in concluding if you follow these steps you will can to give medications to patients.
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, the
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manufacturer the
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medication
. They count amounts of substances that need it. Then they
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start
of manufacturing of medications. Second, they pack the medications in boxes.
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Before
they pack the medications, they count to how much
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medication
should be in one box. The third- step, when they
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get
on purchaser, they
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sall
it. Until they
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get
purchaser, they post
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adavntege
in media. Then they will
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get
purchaser. The
next
step they will transport medications to far
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patients
. That happen
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because
posting in media,
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so
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many
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patients
in
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different
places
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saw
that and
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buy
it.
Finally
,
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patient
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use
it.
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Whille
the
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patient
has
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medication
, he or she will
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use
it. in concluding if you follow these steps you will can to give medications to
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patients
.

IELTS essay We have many famuse medication in this world as Covid-19 vaccien, and many patients get it, so today I will talk about how to get the patient the medication in steps

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