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We have become a disposable society, preferring to buy new products rather than repair existing items.

We have become a disposable society, preferring to buy new products rather than repair existing items. ELpjR

Whether we have become too involved with buying new products or not is a matter of controversy in this technology modern world. several related issues can be anticipated in terms of living in a disposable society but steps can definitely be taken to inform these problems. On the one hand, some experts are of the conception that we are living in an era when modernised production methods allow goods to be mass produced and it provides the individuals with an opportunity to buy anything at a lower cost. In terms of quality, these kinds of production may not have the longevity compares to handmade items. For this sole reason, it leads people to buying brand new items in liue of repairing them. Furthermore, evolutions in technology are now rapid and encourage people to afford the latest brand and a clear example would obviously be smart phones here. Although, some assume that the style of living in a disposable environment can be altered. First of all, authorities are required to raise tax of goods in order to diminish the number of consumers. Secondly, advertisement play a pivotal role to tempt people spending their money on goods and for such issue to be solved, all of the industries should not have a right to advertise their productions. As a result, the quality of stuff should be promoted in order to use them in the long run. To sum up, these problems will not be tackled unless the quality of goods should valued over the quantity.

Whether we have become too involved with buying new products or not is a matter of controversy in this technology modern world. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSeveral
several
 related issues can be anticipated
 in terms of living in a disposable society This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 steps can definitely be taken
 to inform these problems.

On the one hand, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 experts are of the conception that we are living in an era when Possible spelling mistake. 'modernised' is British English.modernized
modernised
 production methods This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withequipmentpropertyfurnishingsfurniture
goods
 to be This word is normally spelled with hyphen.mass-produced
mass produced
 and it provides the individuals with an opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 anything at a lower cost. In terms of quality, these kinds of production may not have the longevity compares to handmade items. For this sole reason, it leads This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to buying 'brand new' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "brand-new".brand-new
brand new
 items in Possible spelling mistake found.lifelikelinelivelielieu
liue
 of repairing them. Furthermore
, evolutions in technology are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 rapid and encourage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to afford the latest brand and a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 example would obviously
 be smart phones here.

“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 assume that the style of living in a disposable environment can be altered
. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, authorities are required
 to raise tax of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withequipmentpropertyfurnishingsfurniture
goods
 in order to diminish the number of consumers. Secondly
, advertisement play a pivotal role to tempt This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 spending their money on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withequipmentpropertyfurnishingsfurniture
goods
 and for such issue to be solved
, Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 industries should not have a right to advertise their productions. As a result
, the quality of stuff should be promoted
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 them in the long run.

To sum up, these problems will not be tackled
 unless the quality of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withequipmentpropertyfurnishingsfurniture
goods
 should The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "value"value
valued
 over the quantity. 