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Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws

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Cars were roaming British roads since 1888, and nowadays there are over 29 million vehicles in Great Britain alone. This essay will be discussing introduction of alternative mobility options and international laws controlling car ownership and use, which in my opinion, is absolutely necessary to regulate such a large and important aspect of the community's everyday life. Ever since the production of cars in the 1800s, people have relied on them for almost every part of the daily life, from ambulances to trucks and buses, but most importantly personal vehicles. This meant that every household that can afford buying a car will most definitely do so. Going forward to recent years, studies have shown that most household now own at least one vehicle; which can be helpful in achieving daily tasks, however, this can result in some negative experiences on the road, such as heavy traffic and accidents. Therefore, it is completely necessary to provide alternative solutions to minimize the negative effects of such problems. One of the key factors to resolve these issues is alternative forms of transport, such as buses for example, providing mobility for a great number of people resulting in less traffic and accidents due to less usage of personal cars. As well as trains, which are regarded one of the fastest and most reliable and time saving alternatives. In addition to buses and trains, regulating vehicles market and usage is another tremendously important factor. It is very important to have international laws enforced regarding buying and using cars, for instance, applying for a driver's license should have certain guidelines and requirements, as well as thorough testing for each applicant. In addition to that, purchasing a car should be under specific criteria, for example, having a certain bank account balance and history, a steady source of income, and enforcing car insurance laws. Overall, cars are a very important part of the communities' personal and work life, it is a privilege to have; and therefore it should absolutely be managed very strictly all over the world through rules that are taken very seriously, and insuring that individuals have positive experiences through alternative types of transportation like buses and trains as mentioned above.
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Cars
were roaming British roads since 1888, and nowadays there are over 29 million
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vehicles
in Great Britain alone. This essay will be discussing introduction of
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alternative
mobility options and international laws controlling
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car
ownership and
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use
, which in my opinion, is
absolutely
necessary to regulate such a large and
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important
aspect of the community's everyday life.

Ever since the production of
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cars
in the 1800s,
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people
have relied on them for almost every part of the daily life, from ambulances to trucks and buses,
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but
most
importantly
personal
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vehicles
. This meant that every household that can afford
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buying
a
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car
will most definitely do
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so
. Going forward to recent years, studies have shown that most household
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now
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own
at least one
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vehicle
; which can be helpful in achieving daily tasks,
however
, this can result in
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some
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negative
experiences on the road, such as heavy traffic and accidents.
Therefore
, it is completely necessary to provide
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alternative
solutions to minimize the
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negative
effects of such problems. One of the key factors to resolve these issues is
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alternative
forms of transport, such as buses
for example
, providing mobility for a great number of
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people
resulting in less traffic and accidents due to less usage of personal
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cars
.
As well
as trains, which
are regarded
one of the fastest and most reliable and time saving alternatives.

In addition
to buses and trains, regulating
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vehicles
market and usage is another
tremendously
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important
factor. It is
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very
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important
to have international laws enforced regarding buying and using
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cars
,
for instance
, applying for a driver's license should have certain guidelines and requirements,
as well
as thorough testing for each applicant.
In addition
to that, purchasing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
should be under specific criteria,
for example
, having a certain bank account balance and history, a steady source of income, and enforcing
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car
insurance laws.

Overall
,
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cars
are a
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very
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important
part of the communities' personal and work life, it is a privilege to have; and
therefore
it should
absolutely
be managed
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very
strictly
all over the world through
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rules
that
are taken
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very
seriously
, and insuring that individuals have
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positive
experiences through
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alternative
types of transportation like buses and trains as mentioned above.
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IELTS essay Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
365 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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