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we do not recycle enough waste and then the government has to apply recycling law to solve this problem.

we do not recycle enough waste and then the government has to apply recycling law to solve this problem. k5p58
It is common belief that we do not recycle enough waste and then the government has to apply recycling law to solve this problem. However, I personally agree with others who argue that punishment is not the only method that can address this situation as the following. On the one hand, legal regulations might be one possible way to handle the waste problem. For instance, by requiring the householders to classify waste into different categories at home before transferring garbage to the recycle center might lead to building new good habits and raising people's awareness about the environment. In case people would not follow the rule, politicians can apply various kinds of punishment based on level of crime. On the other hand, although there are good arguments for waste obligation as mentioned above, I believe that other methods can be introduced to solve this problem. In my opinion, the government should promote education about the importance of recycling programs which would change our lifestyle for the long term. For example, local authorities could organize and provide a wide range of workshops for change in separate waste practices for kids and homeowners. Another way we could use is spending the country's budget to improve recycling facilities and systems, so that waste is processed more effectively. From what has been discussed above, in conclusion, I hold my position that a recycling law is not the only measure that governments should take to address the waste problems.
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enough
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waste
and then the
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government
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has to
apply
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recycling
law to solve this
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problem
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However
, I
personally
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agree
with others who argue that punishment is not the
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only
method that can address this situation as the following.

On the one hand, legal regulations might be one possible way to handle the
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waste
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problem
.
For instance
, by requiring the householders to classify
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waste
into
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different
categories at home
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before
transferring garbage to the recycle center might lead to building new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
habits and raising
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people
's awareness about the environment. In case
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people
would not follow the
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rule
, politicians can apply various kinds of punishment based on level of crime.

On the other hand
, although there are
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good
arguments for
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waste
obligation as mentioned above, I believe that other methods can
be introduced
to solve this
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problem
. In my opinion, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should promote education about the importance of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
programs which would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
our lifestyle for the long term.
For example
, local authorities could organize and provide a wide range of workshops for
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change
in separate
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waste
practices for kids and homeowners. Another way we could
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use
is spending the country's budget to
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improve
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recycling
facilities and systems,
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so
that
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waste
is processed
more
effectively
.

From what has
been discussed
above,
in conclusion
, I hold my position that a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
law is not the
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only
measure that
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governments
should take to address the
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waste
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problems
.
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IELTS essay we do not recycle enough waste and then the government has to apply recycling law to solve this problem.

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