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Crime fiction and TV dramas

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Novels and television dramas are a reflection of the society in general. What is shown in dramas is similar to what actually happens in our society. In most of the countries today, crime novels and TV dramas related to crime are becoming common and, individuals are adoring these types of shows and books. In my opinion, this is not a positive development for the society as dramas and books can be an effective medium to sway the mind-set of the people. TV shows and books are a great source of entertainment and the favourite pastime of general public. In recent times series and books related to crime are gaining more and more popularity. The primary reason for this is that they involve such stories or characters which influence the audience. Moreover, people start relating their life to this type of entertainments. Crime novels and books involve nudity, violence and robbery which people think will refresh them after a long day at work. However, crime related series or books contain content which is strictly targeted at a selected audience. This type of shows cannot be watched with the entire family. Also, some people may get inspired by such shows and enact the same in their life. Unfortunately, this can have disastrous consequences for them and the society. To conclude, production houses or writers should create such type of stories which have a beneficial effect on the society. They need to understand that their work influences the masses and hence they should produce stories and movies which have a reformatory effect on the society.
Novels and television
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in general
. What
is shown
in
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is similar to what actually happens in our
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. In most of the countries
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today
,
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crime
novels and TV
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dramas
related to
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crime
are becoming common and, individuals are adoring these
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types
of
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shows
and
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books
. In my opinion, this is not a
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positive
development for the
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society
as
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dramas
and
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books
can be an effective medium to sway the mind-set of the
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people
.

TV
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shows
and
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books
are a great source of entertainment and the
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favourite
pastime of
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general public
. In recent times series and
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books
related to
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crime
are gaining more and more popularity.

The primary reason for this is that they involve such stories or characters which influence the audience.
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,
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people
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start
relating their life to this
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type
of entertainments.
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novels and
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books
involve nudity, violence and robbery which
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people
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think
will refresh them after a long day at work.

However
,
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crime
related series or
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books
contain content which is
strictly
targeted at a selected audience. This
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type
of
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shows
cannot be
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watched
with the entire family.
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,
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some
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people
may
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get
inspired by such
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shows
and enact the same in their life. Unfortunately, this can have disastrous consequences for them and the society.

To conclude
, production
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houses
or writers should create such
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type
of stories which have a beneficial effect on the
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society
. They need to understand that their work influences the masses and
hence
they should produce stories and movies which have a reformatory effect on the
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society
.
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IELTS essay Crime fiction and TV dramas

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
262 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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