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The illustration describes the process of producing steel rods in the industry of furniture. Overall, there are a total of 11 stages beginning with raw materials like iron ore, yellow ore and carbon are collected and ending with the finished goods which are inspected before being consumed. Firstly, three main raw materials are dug from the ground prior to being melted in the melting slit at the temperature of 1300 to 1500 celsius degree. The melting mixture then be refined in a smelting cabin followed by the condescent metal is poured into ingots by a pouring machine. By the fifth stage, the metal will go through nozzle which are connected to ingots for being cooled with the temperature of 60 to 100 celsius degree. Subsiquently, the cooled metal then undergoes the rolling process to form its shape. After that, the formed metal is baked in a heating machine before being measured by a measuring automaton and being cut into an ideal size by a cutter. Finally, the finished goods are stamped with ID and have to go through an inspection stage before being delivered to shop for consumers to buy.

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describes
 the process of producing steel rods in the industry of furniture.

Overall
, there are a total of 11 stages beginning with raw materials like iron ore, yellow ore and carbon are collected
 and ending with the finished This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 which are inspected
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before
being consumed
.

Firstly
, three main raw materials are dug
 from the ground prior to being melted
 in the melting slit at the temperature of 1300 to 1500 Possible spelling mistake found.Celsius
celsius
 degree. The melting mixture then be refined
 in a smelting cabin followed by the Possible spelling mistake found.condescendcon descent
condescent
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metal
is poured
 into ingots by a pouring machine. By the fifth stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalloyoreingothardwaremineral
metal
 will go through nozzle which are connected
 to ingots for being cooled
 with the temperature of 60 to 100 Possible spelling mistake found.Celsius
celsius
 degree. Possible spelling mistake found.Subsequently
Subsiquently
, the cooled You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalloyoreingothardwaremineral
metal
 then undergoes the rolling process to form its shape.

After that, the formed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalloyoreingothardwaremineral
metal
is baked
 in a heating machine This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being measured
 by a measuring automaton and being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into an ideal size by a cutter. Finally
, the finished This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
are stamped
 with ID and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go through an inspection stage This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being delivered
 to shop for consumers to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
. 