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We can see that on social media, people increasingly use shorter content, so gradually the user’s ability to focus is also reduced

We can see that on social media, people increasingly use shorter content, so gradually the user’s ability to focus is also reduced JKPY0

We can see that on social media, people increasingly use shorter content, so gradually the user’s ability to focus is also reduced, so gradually the user’s ability to focus is also reduced. And part of this is the reason people get bored quickly. So if we find it difficult to concentrate, you should try spending time in the day without using your phone( this method is called” digital detox” ). Social media users are increasingly using shorter content, reducing their ability to focus as a result. That's why people eventually get bored so easily. Keep attempting to spend some time during the day without using your phone (this approach is termed "digital detox") if you have trouble concentrating.

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