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We are wired at all time smart phones have changed the way we communicate with people in the world.More than it's advantages ,it is seen as a distraction. How badly is your influenced, and what solution are there to stay away from the device ?discuss.

We are wired at all time smart phones have changed the way we communicate with people in the world. More than it's advantages, it is seen as a distraction. How badly is your influenced, and what solution are there to stay away from the device? discuss. jR5ra
In concurrent era several new method of communication has been discovered, but smart phone us more draticalky influenced by people. By using smart ohone human can communicate with another who is livubg far away. athough there are also to many distraction being seen in society like missusing of smartohones. while the solution is to limit it uses. i depicts the discussion on both the views on ensuring paragraphs.
In concurrent era several new method of communication has
been discovered
,
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but
smart phone us more
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draticalky
influenced by
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people
. By using smart
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ohone
human can communicate with another who is
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livubg
far away.
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athough
there are
also
to
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many
distraction being
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seen
in society like
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missusing
of
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smartohones
.
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while
the solution is to limit it
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uses
.
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i
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depicts
the discussion on both the views on ensuring paragraphs.

IELTS essay We are wired at all time smart phones have changed the way we communicate with people in the world. More than it's advantages, it is seen as a distraction. How badly is your influenced, and what solution are there to stay away from the device? discuss.

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