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Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? YLgKK
In order to run a business well, having professional consultations and official meetings to resolve office issues is a must. These all are taking place through the Internet nowadays. Therefore, this question is coming up again and again whether all these business-related activities are profitable or harmful. This essay will examine both aspects closely before taking any final decision, keeping in mind the convenience of the online business conference than an inconvenience. To begin with, the online business conversation is very smooth and fast. In addition, the importance of this live training can be seen when some organizations are unable to solve many issues sitting face to face. For example, in Corona Pandemic's days, a lot of businesses were on the verge of failing due to the lockdown campaign run by the government duo. Then online meetings and deliberations got the company out of such bad times and the company executives could gain the credibility to run the business properly with mutual advice. Even though online consultation has its own distinct rules, there are many bad effects also. If all business people adopt only the medium of internet for business conversations, then it can be seen that they are damaged by bad effects such as medical diseases including obesity, heart diseases. In India, for example, fatal diseases such as heart failure and heart attack are gathering their feet, the main reason has been seen to be excess body fat, the main reason is a sedentary lifestyle. In conclusion, I fully recognize this and appreciate the steps taken through online consultations for business issues and business practices. Hence, it apparently outweighs its disadvantage as per my opinion. Nevertheless, this is necessary, but I also strongly urge that this system and facility should be used in a sustainable manner, so that along with increasing business, health can be taken care of properly.
In order to run a
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business
well, having professional consultations and official meetings to resolve office issues is a
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must
. These all are taking place through the Internet nowadays.
Therefore
, this question is coming up again and again whether all these business-related activities are profitable or harmful. This essay will examine both aspects
closely
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before
taking any final decision, keeping in mind the convenience of the
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online
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business
conference than an inconvenience.

To
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begin
with, the
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online
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business
conversation is
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very
smooth and
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fast
.
In addition
, the importance of this
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live
training can be
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seen
when
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some
organizations are unable to solve
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many
issues sitting face to face.
For example
, in Corona Pandemic's days,
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a lot of
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businesses
were on the verge of failing due to the lockdown campaign run by the
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government
duo. Then
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online
meetings and deliberations
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got
the
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company
out of such
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bad
times and the
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company
executives could gain the credibility to run the
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business
properly
with mutual advice.

Even though
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online
consultation has its
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own
distinct
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rules
, there are
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many
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bad
effects
also
. If all
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business
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people
adopt
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only
the medium of internet for
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business
conversations, then it can be
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seen
that they
are damaged
by
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bad
effects such as medical diseases including obesity, heart diseases. In India,
for example
, fatal diseases such as heart failure and heart attack are gathering their feet, the main reason has been
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seen
to be excess body
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fat
, the main reason is a sedentary lifestyle.

In conclusion
, I
fully
recognize this and appreciate the steps taken through
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online
consultations for
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business
issues and
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business
practices.
Hence
, it
apparently
outweighs its disadvantage as per my opinion.
Nevertheless
, this is necessary,
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but
I
also
strongly
urge that this system and facility should be
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used
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in a sustainable manner
,
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so
that along with increasing
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business
, health can
be taken
care of
properly
.
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IELTS essay Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
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