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We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? v.3

We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? v. 3
Having good co-workers makes our professional life meaningful while bad colleagues can make our life miserable. Since people spend a considerable amount of their time in their workplaces, characteristics of their co-workers greatly affect the level of job satisfaction. Friendly behaviour, team spirit, helpfulness and professionalism are some important qualities that make someone a great colleague. To begin with, friendly behaviours of an employee would make things easier for other workers. When someone joins a company, the first thing he looks for among his colleagues is the friendly behaviours. Second, team spirit is another important aspect the make worker's life easier in a company. Without it, some employees would suffer greatly to produce the expected output. This is why companies these days look for this trait among the employees. Third, helpfulness of an employee makes the life of other employees lot easier. A helpful colleague would share his knowledge, help finish a project and amiable to others. For instance, during my three years professional life, I have always liked the people who have raised their helping hands whenever needed. My experience taught me that those are good people to rely on. Finally, the professionalism is a quality that drives people to work closely to attain a common goal. Thus those sorts of people would value others opinion, criticism and feedback. They would also advise junior employees and would guide them in difficult times. Alfred Stuart, a former colleague of mine, had a great professionalism and that is why he was reliable, a great team lead and a person to seek advice. All things considered, good qualities like friendliness, helpful mentality, professional attitude and team spirit among co-workers make our working environment healthy and enhances our job satisfaction.
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meaningful while
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bad
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colleagues
can
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make
our
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miserable. Since
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people
spend a considerable amount of their time in their workplaces, characteristics of their co-workers
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affect the level of job satisfaction. Friendly
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spirit, helpfulness and professionalism are
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qualities that
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someone a great colleague.

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with, friendly
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behaviours
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things easier for
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other
workers. When someone
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thing he looks for among his
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is the friendly
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spirit is another
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worker's
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easier in a
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. Without it,
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employees
would suffer
greatly
to produce the
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expected
output. This is why
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companies
these days look for this trait among the
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employees
. Third, helpfulness of an
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employee
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makes
the
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life
of
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other
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lot easier. A helpful
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would share his knowledge,
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help
finish a project and amiable to others.
For instance
, during my three years professional
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life
, I have always liked the
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people
who have raised their helping hands whenever needed. My experience taught me that those are
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good
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people
to rely on.

Finally
, the professionalism is a quality that drives
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people
to work
closely
to attain a common goal.
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Thus
those sorts of
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people
would value others opinion, criticism and feedback. They would
also
advise junior
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employees
and would guide them in difficult times. Alfred Stuart, a former
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colleague
of mine, had a great professionalism and
that is
why he was reliable, a great
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team
lead and a person to seek advice.

All things considered,
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qualities like friendliness, helpful mentality, professional attitude and
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spirit among co-workers
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make
our working environment healthy and enhances our job satisfaction.
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IELTS essay We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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