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ways of protecting the environment

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Environmental pollution is an important problem facing people. this problem is due to activities humans do, such as deforestation, algaculture, and overuse from rivers for transportation or fishing. Currently, there are many ways to reducing this problem, for example, the government shouldn’t allow for cutting off trees and put penalties for those who do it. Also, the farmer should choose the field with more fertile. in the end, there are many factors that cause pollution in the environment, but with improving knowledge about treats with the environment we can reducing the damage to the environment.
Environmental pollution is an
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problem is due to activities humans do, such as deforestation,
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, and overuse from rivers for transportation or fishing.
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ways to reducing this problem,
for example
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shouldn’t
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allow
for cutting off trees and put penalties for those who do it.
Also
, the farmer should choose the field with more fertile.
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in
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end
, there are
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factors that cause pollution in the environment,
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with improving knowledge about treats with the environment we can
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the damage to the environment.
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IELTS essay ways of protecting the environment

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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