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water supply system australia

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the general idea about this representation is the description of water supply system in australia it begins with a dam or a resevoir in which pure water is collected and stored from where the pure water is supplied to the city which includes households, factories and shops the rain water from city drains in the river the waste from dams/storage and the city is recycled in the water treatment plant which helps in conserving the ecosystems and maintains a constant renewal og the countries water supply the redirection of storm water into the rivers proves that country has a good drainage system which plays a major role in preventing floods and avoiding areas of stangnant pools which have been known to be primary areas of vector breeding which results in the spread of deadly diseases the water suppply system of australia not only maintains a good livelihood and an ecosystem whithout problems of water scarcities but also maintains cleanliness and hygiene. the australian water supply system is self sufficient and will remain so in the near future to see
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supply the redirection of storm
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IELTS essay water supply system australia

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
178 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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