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Some people believe that educational qualification always bring success ,while other disagree. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that educational qualification always bring success, while other disagree. 8e9V
Many people trust that teaching in school is very important to achive goal. As it learn only book skill. However, this essay in favour of those who support the graduation passout is not key of success in their life because it is not teach any other skill. Firstly, major number of people think about education is main step of success. So this side is teaching only paper base idea not successful idea. Books have limited number of life learning lessons avilable. Educational degree has give only skill related knowledge for professional. Notebook tutorial is tech exactly as written in pages. For example, research of 2016 in Indian Institute Of Technology Mumbai shows the who are smart in education and got highest number in graduation are 5% success in their life. This side is not very clear to achive goal in life easily only notebook knowledge. Second part is, other real life teaching ability is require to success in life. Beacause wealthy life is need large amount of different idea and they all comes variety of various skill. Human is never coach new real world power in school. People can do fast grow for learn and experience of diffenent idea. For example, world best cricketer Schin Tendulkar had never clear their 10 standard exam but his record in cricket was not beatable to any other person in whole planet. The essay is hold strongly this side for achive new stages of richness requied large number of talent. To conclude, highest men believe that qualification in educational institute is very helpfull to achive goal. But it find only paper skill. Although the other phase of essay can support the degree achiving is not key of success in their well to do compare to new learning capacity.
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people
trust that teaching in school is
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very
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important
to
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achive
goal.
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As
it learn
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only
book
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However
, this essay in
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favour
of those who support the graduation
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passout
is not key of
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success
in their
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life
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because
it is not
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teach
any
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other
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skill
.

Firstly
, major
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number
of
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people
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think
about education is main step of
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success
.
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So
this side is teaching
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only
paper base
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idea
not successful
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idea
. Books have limited
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number
of
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life
learning lessons
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avilable
. Educational degree has give
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only
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skill
related knowledge for professional. Notebook tutorial is tech exactly as
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written in pages
.
For example
, research of 2016 in Indian Institute Of Technology Mumbai
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shows
the who are smart in education and
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got
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highest
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number
in graduation are 5%
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success
in their
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life
. This side is not
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very
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clear
to
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achive
goal in
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life
easily
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only
notebook knowledge.

Second part is,
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other
real
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life
teaching ability is
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require
to
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success
in
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life
.
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Beacause
wealthy
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life
is need
large amount of
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different
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idea and
they all
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comes
variety of various
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skill
. Human is never coach new real world power in school.
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People
can do
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fast
grow for learn and experience of
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diffenent
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idea
.
For example
, world best cricketer
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Schin
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Tendulkar
had never
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clear
their 10 standard exam
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but
his record in cricket was not beatable to any
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other
person in whole planet. The essay is hold
strongly
this side for
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achive
new stages of richness
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requied
large
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number
of talent.

To conclude
,
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highest
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men
believe that qualification in educational institute is
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very
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helpfull
to
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achive
goal.
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But
it
Did you mean "finds"?
find
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only
paper
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skill
.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
the
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other
phase of essay can support the degree
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achiving
is not key of
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success
in their
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well to do
compare to new learning capacity.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that educational qualification always bring success, while other disagree.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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