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water problems, future or the end?

water problems, future or the end? n1d8o
Every living thing on Earth requires water for its life. Water can also be the key to knowing that whether that place exists lives or not. We can say this kind of liquid plays and essential role not only in humankind's life but also living creatures'. In the other hand, in everyday life, in most industrial cities, people seem to waste too much water doing unnecessary actions. For instance, they make fun of fresh drain playing, for example, throwing water balloons. Many factories pump wastewater into lakes, rivers, seas, which causes many environmental issues, even causing death to the creatures which live in the area. Human is not the exception, they are now the victims of what they have caused. Each year, statistical researches shows that over 10. 000 people were caused death due to the bad quality of water that they use for eating and using. In addition, only in the year 2020, over 20. 000 people were died because they met the hydrogen problems. However, there are still more and more humans are lack of knowledges of the importance of water. The misconception leads the human race to mistakes and hence to the cliff of the end. Nonetheless, there are still solutions we can do to assist the environmentalists, like guiding children how to protect lives by reducing the home-using water quantity, limit the time spending in bathrooms, etc. In the end, everything will just based on the perception of people, if we don't take action right now, there will be no way the future will survive.
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water
for its life.
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also
be the key to knowing that whether that place exists
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lives
or not. We can say this kind of liquid plays and essential role not
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only
in humankind's life
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but
also
living creatures'. In the other hand, in everyday life, in most industrial cities,
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people
seem to waste too much
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water
doing unnecessary actions.
For instance
, they
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make
fun of fresh drain playing,
for example
, throwing
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water
balloons.
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Many
factories pump wastewater into lakes, rivers, seas, which causes
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many
environmental issues, even causing death to the creatures which
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live
in the area. Human is not the exception, they are
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now
the victims of what they have caused. Each year, statistical researches
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shows
that over 10. 000
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people
were caused
death due to the
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bad
quality of
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water
that they
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use
for eating and using.
In addition
,
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only
in the year 2020, over 20. 000
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people
were
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died
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because
they met the hydrogen problems.
However
, there are
still
more and more humans are lack of
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knowledges
of the importance of
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water
. The misconception leads the human race to mistakes and
hence
to the cliff of the
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end
. Nonetheless, there are
still
solutions we can do to assist the environmentalists, like guiding children how to protect
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lives
by reducing the home-using
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water
quantity, limit the time spending in bathrooms, etc. In the
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end
, everything will
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just
based on the perception of
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people
, if we don't take action right
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now
, there will be no way the future will survive.
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IELTS essay water problems, future or the end?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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