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The no.of people who are at a risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.What are the problems caused by obesity? how can the problem solved?

The no. of people who are at a risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What are the problems caused by obesity? how can the problem solved? GLrVg

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