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Water pollution has been an increased problem for the last few decades

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over the Bevious few decades i cuseter Pallstic has become more of an issue. This marios Probleam sum havnom people and Animals while, it reduce if people can Aware about the pollution is l's effect of man and wiralife. Nowdays, mary types of pollution is incausing and one of the water Pollution is major Problem that Effect humam cand wild life chemicael Indrestries selase thset cuester into camel, kike and sea din People and animous sere " is sprede disease Luse this cucter is. like. Skin Problem, Hair Problem. etc. more ever chemical factories Jeluse Garbage, ail, un contaminated a there are care mixed in Pune Suitar As a Jedult, Sven clean suscter becomes Palluted coscter. Althouth people throw their dirty garbage in the water. en the other hoend, Government and citizens should supervise every inmarsins. who is not spaude sumcucinated calcetin the camel anti sed Government shouda to tukke strick Jules to the industry they hone gelase there gurbate into another way. Howeven Government should create awareness pragaceans to make the citizems aware that cannot spread fallzetion. People should not drop plastic or any other type of garbage unywhere. so, it is to help slightly decrease Pollution. To conclude, Industries relase their garbage into water as a canel and sea which, Government should strickery action again Industries and people to spread Pollution.
over
the
Bevious
few decades i
cuseter
Pallstic
has become more of an issue. This
marios
Probleam
sum
havnom
people
and Animals while, it
reduce
if
people
can Aware about the
pollution
is l's effect of
man
and
wiralife
.

Nowdays
,
mary
types of
pollution
is
incausing
and one of the water
Pollution
is major Problem that Effect
humam
cand
wild life
chemicael
Indrestries
selase
thset
cuester
into camel,
kike
and sea din
People
and
animous
sere
"
is
sprede
disease
Luse
this
cucter
is. like. Skin Problem, Hair Problem.
etc
. more ever chemical factories
Jeluse
Garbage, ail,
un
contaminated a there are care mixed in Pune
Suitar
As a
Jedult
, Sven clean
suscter
becomes
Palluted
coscter
.
Althouth
people
throw their dirty garbage in the water.

en
the other
hoend
,
Government
and citizens should supervise every
inmarsins
.
who
is not
spaude
sumcucinated
calcetin
the camel anti
sed
Government
shouda
to
tukke
strick
Jules to the industry they hone
gelase
there
gurbate
into another way.
Howeven
Government
should create awareness
pragaceans
to
make
the
citizems
aware that cannot spread
fallzetion
.
People
should not drop plastic or any other type of garbage
unywhere
.
so
, it is to
help
slightly
decrease Pollution.

To conclude
, Industries
relase
their garbage into water as a
canel
and sea which,
Government
should
strickery
action again Industries and
people
to spread
Pollution
.
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IELTS essay Water pollution has been an increased problem for the last few decades

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