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some people think typical teaching of a teacher and student in the class will not exist by the year 2050

some people think typical teaching of a teacher and student in the class will not exist by the year 2050 aA6bV
A few number of people advocate that traditional cultivation between lecturer and learner in the classroom no longer alive in next 30 years. According to my inclination, I agree with the possibility of this statement. My position is justified in ensuring paragraph. A few number of people advocate that traditional cultivation between lecturer and learner in the classroom no longer alive in next 30 years. According to my inclination, I agree with the possibility of this statement. My position is justified in ensuring paragraph.
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Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: "few numbers".
few number
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
advocate that traditional cultivation between lecturer and learner in the classroom no longer alive in
next
30 years. According to my inclination, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the possibility of this statement. My position
is justified
in ensuring paragraph. A
Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: "few numbers".
few number
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
advocate that traditional cultivation between lecturer and learner in the classroom no longer alive in
next
30 years. According to my inclination, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the possibility of this statement. My position
is justified
in ensuring paragraph.
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IELTS essay some people think typical teaching of a teacher and student in the class will not exist by the year 2050

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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