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watching foreign films rather than locally produced films

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It is frequently seemed that a vast majority of people watch foreign films instead of allocate some time for watching their locally produced films. This essay will discuss, why is this being such a big disaster for national film makers and after that it will discuss, whether if government should afford more financial support for them. To begin with, some believe that watching foreign movies, makes us be familiar with various cultures and traditions around the world. As we all know, being informed about numerous cultures, positive points in particular, can lead to improving our own way of living. Never will community extract mere the beneficial points of a culture; Thus, sometimes watching foreign movies can be harmful to a tradition, as well. In addition, the local filmmaking industries, can be motivated by government and the society to make plenty of challengeable films about society issues. Therefore, in order to eager people to waste their time to observing local film, instead of foreign films, government should support filmmaking industries financially well. In conclusion, watching foreign movies can cause both positive and negative affects on people in the community, teenagers in particular. But this can be cured by the governors by supporting filmmaking industries, whether financially or morally.
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frequently
seemed that a vast majority of
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people
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watch
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foreign
films
instead
of allocate
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some
time for watching their
locally
produced films. This essay will discuss, why is this being such a
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big
disaster for national film makers and after that it will discuss, whether if
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should afford more financial support for them. To
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begin
with,
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some
believe that watching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
movies,
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makes
us be familiar with various cultures and traditions around the world. As we all know,
being informed
about numerous cultures,
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positive
points
in particular
, can lead to improving our
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own
way of living. Never will community extract mere the beneficial points of a culture;
Thus
,
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sometimes
watching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
movies can be harmful to a tradition,
as well
.
In addition
, the local filmmaking industries, can
be motivated
by
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government
and the society to
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make
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plenty
of
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challengeable
films about society issues.
Therefore
, in order to eager
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to waste their time to observing local film,
instead
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
films,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should support filmmaking industries
financially
well.
In conclusion
, watching
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foreign
movies can cause both
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positive
and
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negative
affects on
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people
in the community,
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teenagers
in particular
.
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But
this can
be cured
by the governors by supporting filmmaking industries, whether
financially
or
morally
.
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IELTS essay watching foreign films rather than locally produced films

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
207 words
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