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Watch the video in the description, then share with us your opinions on why AIESEC develops Youth Leadership (Minimum 100 words)

Watch the video in the description, then share with us your opinions on why AIESEC develops Youth Leadership (Minimum 100 words) O66kG
“The world is defined by people who live in it” that phrase made me feel amazed and deeply understand the message which AIESEC’s video brings to me. And I absolutely concur with the core idea of AIESEC that Youth Leadership is indispensable for our generation because teenagers are the future of our world and developing youth leadership skills will assist us to create an innovative life. Besides, the new world depends on the youth, and we - the new generation have to shape a new world and nourish the ideal about changing world. And I believe that AIESEC nourishes the potential of the youth and gives them an opportunity to see the future life. If our generation sees the world we can comprehend it and when we understand it, we can modify it.
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in it” that phrase made me feel amazed and
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understand the message which AIESEC’s video brings to me. And I
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concur with the core
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idea
of AIESEC that
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Youth
Leadership is indispensable for our generation
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teenagers
are the future of our
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and developing
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leadership
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skills
will assist us to create an innovative life.
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depends on the
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, and we
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the new generation
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shape a new
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and nourish the ideal about changing
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. And I believe that AIESEC nourishes the potential of the
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youth
and gives them an opportunity to
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the future life. If our generation
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IELTS essay Watch the video in the description, then share with us your opinions on why AIESEC develops Youth Leadership (Minimum 100 words)

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