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Life quality in relation with city size

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Living in a big city has a lot of benefit, but you'll miss some advantage of living in a small town. For example if you live in a small town there is more peaceful area, and you can rest at your home. The second advantage of being in a small town is clean air, in big city air pollution is an important issue. Finally, in a small town there is no traffic jam, so everyone can reach home after work soon. All in being far from big city is good for people
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advantage of living in a
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small
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town
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live
in a
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small
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town
there is more peaceful area, and you can rest at your home. The second advantage of being in a
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small
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town
is clean air, in
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big
city air pollution is an
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important
issue.
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, in a
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small
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town
there is no traffic jam,
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so
everyone can reach home after work
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soon
. All in being far from
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city is
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IELTS essay Life quality in relation with city size

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
91 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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