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Write about the following topic: Waste disposal has become a major problem in your community. Some people say that the solution is for the government to provide waste bin for every household. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. DO AGREE OR DISAGREE.

: Waste disposal has become a major problem in your community. Some people say that the solution is for the government to provide waste bin for every household. DO AGREE OR DISAGREE. eMoA
It is argued that the problem of refuse management can be solved if the government provide individual household with waste bin. This essay agrees with the suggestion that the procurement and distribution of waste bins by the government to every house in a community will go a long way in curbing the challenges of waste disposal. An effect way of reducing indiscriminate dumping of refuse is the provision and the use of waste bins. For instance, in 2014, in Badoore, the local government purchased and distributed refuse bins to their constituents which resulted in the drastic reduction of dumping and piling of household waste materials in the middle of the street, thus reducing pollution and flood, also improving the aesthetic quality of the Area. Furthermore, the use of waste bin in households encourages recycling. Papers, Plastic and Bottles can easily be sorted. This is crucial if we are to meet the goal of sustainable development. For example, in Parkview Estate, each Building possesses multiple waste bins. Each refuse bin is labelled according to the waste material contained in it, making it easier for the garbage truck to sort the waste products resulting in the recycling and reuse. To conclude, the problem of refuse disposal can be mitigated if the government provide waste bin for every household, thus reducing the dumping of waste materials within the community and improving the prospect of sustainable development through recycling. Other solutions like mandatory weekly and monthly cleaning of the environment are also viable but to suffice, must be done in conjunction with the provision of waste bin to respective homes.
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is argued
that the problem of
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refuse
management can
be solved
if the
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government
provide individual
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household
with
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waste
bin. This essay
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agrees
with the suggestion that the procurement and distribution of
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waste
bins by the
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government
to every
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house
in a community will go a long way in curbing the challenges of
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waste
disposal.

An effect way of reducing indiscriminate dumping of
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refuse
is the provision and the
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use
of
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waste
bins.
For instance
, in 2014, in
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Badoore
, the local
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government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
and distributed
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refuse
bins to their constituents which resulted in the drastic reduction of dumping and piling of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
household
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waste
materials in the middle of the street,
thus
reducing pollution and flood,
also
improving the aesthetic quality of the Area.

Furthermore
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
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waste
bin in
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households
encourages recycling. Papers, Plastic and Bottles can
easily
be sorted
. This is crucial if we are to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the goal of sustainable development.
For example
, in
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Parkview
Estate, each Building possesses multiple
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
bins. Each
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refuse
bin
is labelled
according to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
material contained in it, making it easier for the garbage truck to sort the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
products resulting in the recycling and reuse.

To conclude
, the problem of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
refuse
disposal can
be mitigated
if the
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government
provide
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
bin for every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
household
,
thus
reducing the dumping of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
materials within the community and improving the prospect of sustainable development through recycling. Other solutions like mandatory weekly and monthly cleaning of the environment are
also
viable
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but
to suffice,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be done
in conjunction with the provision of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
bin to respective homes.

IELTS essay : Waste disposal has become a major problem in your community. Some people say that the solution is for the government to provide waste bin for every household. DO AGREE OR DISAGREE.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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