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want to be independent like time managenet

want to be independent like time managenet MrNXe

I am currently a senior and preparing to take the university entrance exam, but there are too many exercises and theory as well as activities to do and now that I am an adult, I want to manage my own time. I don't want to rely on my parents anymore, but I don't know how to do it right and there are times when I arrange time for myself but it feels inappropriate because I can't do all my work. my productivity and always feel like I'll never get it done

I am currently
 a senior and preparing to take the university entrance exam, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there are too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 exercises and theory as well
 as activities to do and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 that I am an adult, I want to manage my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 time. I don't want to rely on my parents anymore, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I don't know how to do it right and there are times when I arrange time for myself This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it feels inappropriate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I can't do all my work. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
 productivity and always feel like I'll never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphdone.done!done?done:done,done;
done

IELTS essay want to be independent like time managenet

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

90 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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