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write a paragraph to introduce your favourite program.

write a paragraph to introduce your favourite program. Awd7l
Each episode explores the engineering breakthroughs that have made it possible to develop the largest structures of today. Episodes describe the landmark inventions that have enabled the engineers of today to construct the world's biggest structures, including computer generated imagery. The imagery shows the size of the object in meters, the various designs that were considered, and what might have happened if the engineers had made a mistake, complete with animated figures running in panic.
Each episode explores the engineering breakthroughs that have made it possible to develop the largest structures of
today
. Episodes
describe
the landmark inventions that have enabled the engineers of
today
to construct the world's biggest structures, including computer generated imagery. The imagery
shows
the size of the object in meters, the various designs that
were considered
, and what might have happened if the engineers had made a mistake, complete with animated figures running in panic.
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IELTS essay write a paragraph to introduce your favourite program.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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