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vung tau is my favourite city

vung tau is my favourite city JK9Mj
vũng tàu is a cities nearly beach. it is a lovely place to visit, and it is in southeast vietnam. there is have long beach, mountains. the street is here quite and clean. the attractions are temples and pagoda, old lighthouse built 1907, and worldwide arms museum. in the evening, people can walk around beach for look sunset or they can buy souvenir and some kind of grilled seafood. morning, people often rides bike and go to the beach.
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vũng
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tàu
is
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a cities
nearly
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beach
.
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it
is a lovely place to visit, and it is in southeast
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vietnam
.
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there
is
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have
long
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beach
, mountains.
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the
street is here quite and clean.
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the
attractions are temples and pagoda,
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old
lighthouse built 1907, and worldwide
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arms
museum.
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in
the evening,
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people
can walk around
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beach
for look
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sunset or
they can
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buy
souvenir and
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some
kind of grilled seafood.
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morning
,
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people
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often
rides bike and go to the
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beach
.

IELTS essay vung tau is my favourite city

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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