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vung tau is my favourite city

vung tau is my favourite city JK9Mj

vũng tàu is a cities nearly beach. it is a lovely place to visit, and it is in southeast vietnam. there is have long beach, mountains. the street is here quite and clean. the attractions are temples and pagoda, old lighthouse built 1907, and worldwide arms museum. in the evening, people can walk around beach for look sunset or they can buy souvenir and some kind of grilled seafood. morning, people often rides bike and go to the beach.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterVũng
vũng
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tàu
 is Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a city" or simply "cities"?a citycities
a cities
nearly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 is a lovely place to visit, and it is in southeast Possible spelling mistake found.Vietnam
vietnam
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 is Consider using a past participle here: "had".had
have
 long Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "beached".beached
beach
, mountains. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
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 street is here quite and clean. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 attractions are temples and pagoda, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 lighthouse built 1907, and worldwide Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "arms'" or "arm's"?arms'arm's
arms
 museum. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 the evening, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can walk around You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
 for look Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).sunset, or
sunset or
 they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 souvenir and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 kind of grilled seafood. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMorning
morning
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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often
 rides bike and go to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
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