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The pictures demonstrate the transformation of the small town of lslip following a five-year

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The pictures demonstrate the transformation of the small town of lslip following a five-year renovation project that began in 2005. Overall, the town took on a new look after more infrastructure was built. In 2005, the main road ran from east to west. On both sides of the road are restaurants. Above the main road is the countryside. The lower side of the road includes houses, parks and schools. The houses are located in the middle, the east is the park and the west is the school. Both the park and the school are connected to the main road by small roads. The most obvious change in 2010 was the construction of a double track surrounding the small town. In addition, the main road has been transformed into a pedestrian-only route. Above the road, the shops have been replaced by shopping centers and built a bus station, a parking lot right next to it. Near the new house parking lot, there is a secondary road leading to the main road. Downstairs, the pedestrian-only street still holds the shops, but the house has been moved to the West side and another new house built on the East side. Next to the new house is a miniature park.
The pictures demonstrate the transformation of the
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lslip
following a five-year

renovation project that began in 2005.

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, the town took on a
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new
look after more infrastructure
was built
.

In 2005, the
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main
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road
ran from east to west. On both
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sides
of the
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road
are restaurants. Above the

main
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road
is the countryside. The lower side of the
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road
includes
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houses
, parks and schools. The

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houses
are located
in the middle, the east is the park and the west is the school. Both the park and

the school
are connected
to the
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main
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road
by
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small
roads.

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change
in 2010 was the construction of a double
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track
surrounding the
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town.
In addition
, the
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main
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has
been transformed
into a pedestrian-
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route. Above the

road, the shops have
been replaced
by shopping centers and built a bus station, a parking lot right

next
to it. Near the
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new
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parking lot, there is a secondary
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road
leading to the
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main
road.

Downstairs, the pedestrian-
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still
holds the shops,
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the
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has been
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moved
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West side and another
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built on the East side.
Next
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is a miniature

park.
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IELTS essay The pictures demonstrate the transformation of the small town of lslip following a five-year

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
206 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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