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vsvnslv svlsv sv savvhsl; vl;svs ;vksv svlva/v av kav kj klh sk n nckl nsd snk nds

vsvnslv svlsv sv savvhsl; vl; svs; vksv svlva/v av kav kj klh sk n nckl nsd snk nds j8eWX
In general, the main difference in the face of this village between 1930 and 2010 was the rise of many houses as well as roads leading to the complete conversion of agricultural land. This change led to the expansion of the village. While farmland accounted for more than a third of village land east of the River Stoke in 1930, the agricultural sector disappeared completely in 2010. In that location, houses and roads have sprung up with more than four times as many homes as in 1930. Furthermore, the large house and the gardens were replaced by a retirement home and two shops were gone. But some things remain the same as the post office in the center of town and the bridge in the north, and the primary school remains in the center of the village, opposite the post office, but has been expanded.
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between 1930 and 2010 was the rise of
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as well
as roads leading to the complete conversion of agricultural land. This
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change
led to the expansion of the
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village
. While farmland accounted for more than a third of
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village
land east of the River Stoke in 1930, the agricultural sector disappeared completely in 2010. In that location,
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houses
and roads have sprung up with more than four times as
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many
homes as in 1930.
Furthermore
, the large
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house
and the gardens
were replaced
by a retirement home and two shops
were gone
.
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things remain the same as the post office in the center of town and the bridge in the north, and the primary school remains in the center of the
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, opposite the post office,
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been expanded
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IELTS essay vsvnslv svlsv sv savvhsl; vl; svs; vksv svlva/v av kav kj klh sk n nckl nsd snk nds

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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