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Viviparous raising more and more difficult to stay fit and healthy give reason to come Pro fitness to give ourselves feet

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In this competitive world people are moving towards west and as culture and mostly they prefer fast food now a days then to traditional wear some people believe that nowadays humans are facing more problems related to health or increasing weight I shall discuss both the views and the reasons for my influence the articulated in a trail paragraph first and foremost reason that support my ideology is that mostly all the people as in all the field and they are interested in doing work from their home due to this includes many problems like increase breast weight depression diabetes for example in this pandemic all the people are work from their home because all the companies are closed and all also many people faces many problem and other negative reason is that humans it more junk food that is that is available in a whole place in my hometown and also affect in help because the in the junk food there that was available in whole place in my own and also affect in health because I am cal and colours are very bad for human these situations can be solved by the government and individual responsibility to do some active in workplace and solve sedentary lifestyle and humans more focused on their eating habits and avoiding bird that junk foods only it a traditional and fresh food for men should band and the force road which is located all over in every city and other reasons people to do daily exercise yoga and meditation helps in humans and animals body and mind on the floor scrutiny I conclude that I that induces and government so take to follow healthy diet and exercise
In this competitive world
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are moving towards west and as culture and
mostly
they prefer
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fast
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food
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now a days
then to traditional wear
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some
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people
believe that nowadays
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humans
are facing more problems related to health or increasing weight I shall discuss both the views and the
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reasons
for my influence the articulated in a trail paragraph
first
and foremost
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reason
that support my ideology is that
mostly
all the
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people
as in all the
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field and
they
are interested
in doing work from their home due to this includes
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many
problems like increase breast weight depression diabetes
for example
in this pandemic all the
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people
are work from their home
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because
all the
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companies
are closed
and all
also
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many
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people
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faces
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and other
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negative
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reason
is that
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humans
it more junk
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food
that is
that is
available in a whole place in my hometown and
also
affect in
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help
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because
the in the junk
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there that was available in whole place in my
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own
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also
affect in health
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because
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be solved
by the
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government
and individual responsibility to do
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some
active in workplace and solve sedentary lifestyle and
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humans
more focused on their eating habits and avoiding bird that junk
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foods
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only
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it
a traditional and fresh
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food
for
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men
should band and the force road which
is located
all over in every city and other
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reasons
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people
to do daily exercise yoga and meditation
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helps
in
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humans
and animals body and mind on the floor scrutiny I conclude that I that induces and
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government
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so
take to follow healthy diet and exercise
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IELTS essay Viviparous raising more and more difficult to stay fit and healthy give reason to come Pro fitness to give ourselves feet

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
283 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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