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describe a time when you did something because of social proof

describe a time when you did something because of social proof XyB7q

Last month, when my sunscreen is running out, I decide to buy a new sunscreen but I don’t know what is suitable for me. So I find some informations about some new suncreen in many forums, magazines, youtube channels and many groups about skincare on facebook. I research carefully into texture, cost and real feeling when using it although some of it is seedings. I feel very uncomfortable when I use some unsuitable sunscreen because my skin is very oily. When I was finding information, I saw a sunscreen which many people like. I am excited about it so I bought it

Last month, when my sunscreen is running out, I decide to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a new sunscreen This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I don’t know what is suitable for me. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I find This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
The word 'informations' is a legal term. In standard English, the word 'information' is a non-count noun. Did you mean "information"?information
informations
 about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new Possible spelling mistake found.sunscreen
suncreen
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 forums, magazines, Possible spelling mistake found.YouTubeyou tubeYouTuber
youtube
 channels and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 groups about skincare on Possible spelling mistake found.Facebookface book
facebook
. I research carefully
 into texture, cost and real feeling when using it although This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of it is Possible spelling mistake found.seedingseedlingsfeedingsseeingssee dings
seedings
. I feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 uncomfortable when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 unsuitable sunscreen This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my skin is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 oily. When I was finding information, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a sunscreen which This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 like. I am excited
 about it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
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it