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Vist new friend house.how it was? When you go to visit? What's your plan during this days?

Vist new friend house. how it was? When you go to visit? What's your plan during this days? K3b59
Heloo dear, How are you? I am fine. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am coming in your country for vacation. Hope this letter finds you great heath and radiant joy. My joys knows no bounds when I plan to visit you. In summer I have long vacation so I decided to take a short break. I think It will be a refreshing for my next working days. I am very greatfull to find a friend like you. Believe me, it will be great pleasure to you that you and me spend some nostalgic memories. Hope to see you soon. Your lovingly Marzia
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Heloo
dear, How are you? I am fine. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am
The words "come in" and "come to" have different meanings. "Come in your office" means "have an orgasm in your office." "Come to" or "Come into" means "enter." Did you mean "come to" or "come into"?
coming in
your country for vacation. Hope this letter finds you great heath and radiant joy. My joys
You should probably use "know".
knows
no bounds when I plan to visit you. In
The comma is probably missing here: "summer, I".
summer I
have long vacation
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so
I decided to take a short break. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
It will be a refreshing for my
next
working days. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
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greatfull
to find a friend like you. Believe me, it will be great pleasure to you that you and me spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
nostalgic memories. Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. Your
lovingly
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Marzia
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IELTS essay Vist new friend house. how it was? When you go to visit? What's your plan during this days?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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