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Vist new friend house.how it was? When you go to visit? What's your plan during this days?

Vist new friend house. how it was? When you go to visit? What's your plan during this days? K3b59

Heloo dear, How are you? I am fine. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am coming in your country for vacation. Hope this letter finds you great heath and radiant joy. My joys knows no bounds when I plan to visit you. In summer I have long vacation so I decided to take a short break. I think It will be a refreshing for my next working days. I am very greatfull to find a friend like you. Believe me, it will be great pleasure to you that you and me spend some nostalgic memories. Hope to see you soon. Your lovingly Marzia

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 your country for vacation. Hope this letter finds you great heath and radiant joy. My joys You should probably use "know".know
knows
 no bounds when I plan to visit you. In The comma is probably missing here: "summer, I".summer, I
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think
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 working days. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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greatfull
 to find a friend like you. Believe me, it will be great pleasure to you that you and me spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 nostalgic memories. Hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Your lovingly
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IELTS essay Vist new friend house. how it was? When you go to visit? What's your plan during this days?

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

106 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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