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Nowadays various art and culture is exported to foreign countries do you agree disagree

Nowadays various art and culture is exported to foreign countries do you agree disagree ewyQA

There is no denying the fact that due to sharing of trade and cultural activities among all the nations in the world has become a global village. Some masses assert that relations because of enhancing cultured and business among countries is a positive aspect while other deem that it leads to loss of normal identity. I personally agree with the statement and my views will be discussed in the length of upcoming paragraphs.

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Some
 masses assert that relations This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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positive
 aspect while other deem that it leads to loss of normal identity. I personally
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agree
 with the statement and my views will be discussed
 in the length of upcoming paragraphs. 

IELTS essay Nowadays various art and culture is exported to foreign countries do you agree disagree

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American English

1 paragraphs

73 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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