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virus is increased day by day even if it can not made vaccine of this illness Eventually , government should doing action on all person who breaking laws wherever people break the law police can arrested him. apart from that people will give a fine to police which break laws.There is horrible situation in India .Eventhough people facing lot of issues which stay at home they have no food to eat and not money to buy basis things .I will request to government whether they will be transfer money to poor people in bank accounts.Instead, I have be lost my job ,for people rights

virus is increased day by day even if it can not made vaccine of this illness Eventually, government should doing action on all person who breaking laws wherever people break the law police can arrested him. apart from that people will give a fine to police which break laws. There is horrible situation in India. Eventhough people facing lot of issues which stay at home they have no food to eat and not money to buy basis things. I will request to government whether they will be transfer money to poor people in bank accounts. Instead, I have be lost my job, for people rights WyAmK
virus is increased day by day even if it can not made vaccine of this illness Eventually, government should doing action on all person who breaking laws wherever people break the law police can arrested him. apart from that people will give a fine to police which break laws. There is horrible situation in India. Eventhough people facing lot of issues which stay at home they have no food to eat and not money to buy basis things. I will request to government whether they will be transfer money to poor people in bank accounts. Instead, I have be lost my job, for people rights
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virus
is increased
day by day even if it can not
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made
vaccine of this illness
Eventually
,
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government
should
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doing
action on all person who breaking laws wherever
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people
break the law police can arrested him.
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apart
from that
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people
will give a fine to police which break laws. There is horrible situation in India.
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Eventhough
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people
facing
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lot of
issues which stay at home they have no food to eat and not money to
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buy
basis things. I will request to
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government
whether they will be transfer money to poor
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people
in bank accounts.
Instead
, I have
be lost
my job, for
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people
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rights
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IELTS essay virus is increased day by day even if it can not made vaccine of this illness Eventually, government should doing action on all person who breaking laws wherever people break the law police can arrested him. apart from that people will give a fine to police which break laws. There is horrible situation in India. Eventhough people facing lot of issues which stay at home they have no food to eat and not money to buy basis things. I will request to government whether they will be transfer money to poor people in bank accounts. Instead, I have be lost my job, for people rights

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