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Violet films and TV programs are among the most popular foam of entertainment today why do you think these programs are popular? Propose possible reasons to explain the large number of viewers.

Violet films and TV programs are among the most popular foam of entertainment today why do you think these programs are popular? Propose possible reasons to explain the large number of viewers. weVnN
In neoteric era, in fast paced life entertainment is very useful to reduce the stress and also make comfortable. There are numerous types of films and programs are popular in today's life and also various reasons behind of this popularity like attractive scenes and full fill with suspence. Both aspects will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To embark with, many types of programmes and films are famous among youngsters because of thriller scenes. secondly, various types of varities includes in film like historical place and also other things who can increase the curiosity of humans. In addition, mobile play a crucial role because of not want to go other for watch the movie and it can possible anywhere and anytime. for instance, in Hollywood movie the bike stunts make film more interesting. On the flipside, there are lots of reasons behind of this. Moreover before release the movie, the product of movie decided to marketing and make the poster for much earning. On the other hand, sevaral application available in mobile phone and also anyone can watch the movie in applications like Netflix even available in various types of languages. For example, many people who do not knows the Hollywood movie in their native languages and also actor of movie attracts the people with their six packs and new looks. To sum up, different types of films and programs helps people to reduce the stress and also it is prove beneficial in various ways.
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paced life entertainment is
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make
comfortable. There are numerous
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today
's life and
also
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reasons behind of this popularity like attractive scenes and full fill with
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suspence
. Both aspects will
be discussed
in upcoming paragraphs. To embark with,
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many
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programmes
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among youngsters
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because
of thriller scenes.
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,
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varities
includes in film like historical place and
also
other things who can increase the curiosity of humans.
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, mobile play a crucial role
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of not want to go other for
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and it
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instance, in Hollywood
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movie
the bike stunts
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make
film more interesting. On the
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flipside
, there are lots of reasons behind of this.
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Moreover
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release the
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movie
, the product of
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movie
decided to marketing and
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make
the poster for much earning.
On the other hand
,
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sevaral
application available in mobile phone and
also
anyone can
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the
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movie
in applications like Netflix even available in
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types
of languages.
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,
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people
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the Hollywood
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movie
in their native languages and
also
actor of
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movie
attracts the
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people
with their six packs and new looks. To sum up,
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different
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types
of films and programs
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helps
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people
to
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stress
and
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IELTS essay Violet films and TV programs are among the most popular foam of entertainment today why do you think these programs are popular? Propose possible reasons to explain the large number of viewers.

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