Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back bullies. Discuss this view and give your opinion. v.2
Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back bullies. Discuss this view and give your opinion. v. 2
Now days violence, as a concept is increasing in our society and our most vital part of it, children, are influenced by this despite the role of parents on eliminating this phenomenon.
Firstly, the unlimited and not strictly is a major reason of bad attitudes mostly at teenagers. Social media like facebook, twitter, instagram are creating different models, usually not educational and inspiring for this part of society, which is projecting the future. The extreme example is a teenager girl from Indonesia that make a question in her personal instragram account if she should die or not, because she was very upset from her life and the result of the poll was 70 % confirm.
Secondly, we are living on a very competitive society. This competition brings even bad aspects like intimidating, no fair play, attacking feelings etc instead of winning a debate or a particular case. Teens are pushing by many factors to do well in school, to get high grades, to be prepared for work trade, that is not always fair or equally for everyone.
However family, especially parents, have difficult mission on reducing the amount of bullies among the children. Teaching on how a teen should do or speak in front of bullies is crucial to lose that impact on their personality. Human behaviour is very sensitive on that age and more should be done from educational system too.
In conclusion our global society have increase a lot verbal violence, but we as a parent or adults should lead the younger generation towards good values and integrity.
Now
days
violence, as a concept is increasing in our
society
and our most vital part of it, children,
are influenced
by this despite the role of parents on eliminating this phenomenon.
Firstly
, the unlimited and not
strictly
is a major reason of
bad
attitudes
mostly
at
teenagers
. Social media like
facebook
, twitter,
instagram
are creating
different
models,
usually
not educational and inspiring for this part of
society
, which is projecting the future. The extreme example is a
teenager
girl from Indonesia that
make
a question in her personal
instragram
account if she should
die
or not,
because
she was
very
upset from her life and the result of the poll was 70 % confirm.
Secondly
, we are living on a
very
competitive
society
. This competition brings even
bad
aspects like intimidating, no
fair
play, attacking feelings etc
instead
of winning a debate or a particular case. Teens are pushing by
many
factors to do well in school, to
get
high grades, to
be prepared
for work trade,
that is
not always
fair
or
equally
for everyone.
However
family,
especially
parents, have difficult mission on reducing the amount of bullies among the children. Teaching on how a teen should do or speak in front of bullies is crucial to lose that impact on their personality. Human
behaviour
is
very
sensitive on that age and more should
be done
from educational system too.
In conclusion
our global
society
have increase a
lot
verbal violence,
but
we as a parent or adults should lead the younger generation towards
good
values and integrity.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes