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vietnam mid autumn festival

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The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional holidays in Vietnam. For me, it is also the most wonderful and exciting festival. Mid-Autumn Festival is celebrated not only in Vietnam but also in several other parts of Asia, including China, Japan and Korea. Every year, on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, when the full moon shines at night. The original meaning of this ancient festival was that it represented family reunion. Everyone will go home and eat mooncakes together. However, in Vietnam, mid-autumn festival is mainly an occasion for children to celebrate and enjoy the best time of the year. On the night of August 15, the streets are always filled with carnival shoppers and wanderers. Parents often buy star lanterns for their children, and there are also some special events such as lantern parades and dances for them today. I love the mid-autumn festival because it's a chance for me to remember my childhood and feel young again.

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