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Some people say that youngster should do part-time jobs while study in university

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In the present era of modernization, people have different perspective regarding their life. It is clearly stated that number of people say that how much crucial part- time job is in recent times. I totally agree with this statement because it is a good way to become independent by pursuing part-time job while study in university. As far as i know, students often prefer part-time jobs because they believe that it would give them with financial security and a feeling of being reliable on themself. For eg. I am pursuing my bachelor's in business administration but i do look for part- time jobs as well and everytime if i get a chance to do part-time job, i never take step back for myself from showing interest in this. According to me, the part-time jobs gives student a better experience and sometimes, the student's family is not that much capable to pay fees of the university. Then, part-time jobs would help them there. Some people who find themselves enough rich to pay University fee and possess conservative thinking regarding part-time jobs don't usually allow their children to do part-time jobs. I personally recommend every person to have a sort of niche on this factor because being independent and doing everything at a factual point really gives you satisfaction. All in all, if one wants to be a better person and want to learn so many lessons should opt for part-time job.

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