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Technology is extremely important. Nowadays there are kinds of technology like movie and online games become addicted to play from all teenagers. We will display argue points of view about effect of life. First, the supporters of the action are they have freedom to watch movie or play games which they do not affect anyone. If some films or video games send a bad idea, we should forbidden from them. For instance, my friends is quite fond of movies action which he after come-back from his job, he spend a long time waiting it and he says “it is remove stress after hard day". On the other hand, the non support of these kinds from films or video games because presence of violent and crime scenes which lead to Change mindset of children to be more aggressive. If children spend a long time play it, they will effect on brain concentration and encourage to imitate in real life. For exemplified, Egypt suffers from a high case from suicide among of teenager and children after play games like blue wheal and Pubge. In conclusion, last decade Increase video game especially online. Wherefore, I believe my opinion not completely forbidden but we need monitor from family due to adversely to society and change mind of teenager.

Technology is extremely
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important
. Nowadays there are kinds of technology like movie and online You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 become addicted to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
 from all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
. We will display argue points of view about effect of life.

First
, the supporters of the action are they have freedom to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 movie or You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 which they do not affect anyone. If This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 films or video You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
, we should Did you mean "have forbidden" or "forbid"?have forbiddenforbid
forbidden
 from them. For instance
, my friends is quite fond of movies action which he after This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
-back from his job, he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "spends", "spent".spendsspent
spend
 a long time waiting Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).it, and
it and
 he says “it is remove This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 after This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 dayUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
"
.

On the other hand
, the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.non-supportnonsupport
non support
 of these kinds from films or video You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 presence of violent and crime scenes which lead to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
Change
 mindset of children to be more aggressive. If children spend a long time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
 it, they will Did you mean "affect"?affect
effect
 on brain concentration and encourage Did you mean "imitating"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.imitating
to imitate
 in real life. For exemplified, Egypt suffers from a high case from suicide among of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenileadolescent
teenager
 and children after You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 like blue wheal and Possible spelling mistake found.PurgePUBG
Pubge
.

In conclusion
, last decade Increase video game especially
 online. Wherefore, I believe my opinion not completely forbidden This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we need monitor from family due to adversely
 to society and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 mind of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenileadolescent
teenager
. 