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Describe the lfie cycle of a fish

Describe the lfie cycle of a fish Wm3Mb

The picture illustrates the life cycle of a fish. Overall, his life cycle consists of 6 stages from eggs to fully adult. First of all, the fertilized eggs hatch to turn larvae, which are usually poorly formed, carry a large yolk sac, and are often very different in appearance from juvenile and adult fish. At the end of the larval stage, when the yolk sac is absorbed and the young fish begin to swim more actively and move to the fry stage. At the fry and fingerling stage, fish begin to eat solid food. During these stages, fish are voracious eaters, eating about 10 percent of their body weight per day. As the fish continue to grow, the percentage body weight of food per day decreases and fish becomes Juvenile. Juvenile is the period of most rapid growth, the young fish literally lives to eat and grow. This period ends as soon as the organism’s gonads (reproductive organs) mature and it is capable of reproductive activity. The Adult period is at the time the fish is reproductively functional, it ends at that moment the gonads cease functioning and the fish can no longer reproduce. In terms of spawning adult (broodstock fish), assuming the fish dies of old age (which very few do), this period is the greater part of the fish’s life and may last for many years.

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move
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, fish are voracious eaters, eating about 10 percent of their body weight per day. As the fish continue to grow, the percentage body weight of food per day decreases and fish becomes Juvenile.

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