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Very few school children learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum. Do you agree or disagree?

Very few school children learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum. 2ny6

Most of the children need guidance while developing their intellectual from ignorance to be responsible. Schools are the best way to sharpen their minds and teach them moral values. But most of the times, they forget to teach kids, the value of money. Below, in this essay I will discuss some points regarding this issue. Money, being an important part of each person's life, should be introduced to the kids in a very responsible way. Children should be provided with money and in schools, they must be asked how they spend them. For example, in my school, we were asked to bring Rs. 5 once in a week and we had to inform our guides that how did we use them on the weekends. It will not only inspire them to help the needy ones, but also they will create in themselves, the habit of saving that will be helpful for them in hard times. Some people argue that kids should not be provided with money at small age. they believe that getting money at this age will build the habit of being extravagant in them. People claims that it must be the duty of parents to teach them about their home conditions and they should set some examples to be followed by their kids. I am convinced that kids can develop their habits in early age. So, they should be provided with the knowledge of spending money in a wise way and this should be taught at schools to the children with responsibility.

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